3 thoughts on “Catching rain in the mug I bought from the potters by Scargo Lake after my father’s death”

1. Lynne Burnett September 25, 2020 at 7:32 pm

   Love the haiku quality of this, Jeff! Beautiful and poignant.

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   1. Jeff Schwaner Post authorSeptember 25, 2020 at 7:39 pm

      Thanks Lynne.

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2. Chris Furst October 14, 2020 at 11:58 pm

   I love the way you repeat the word “small” and give it greater weight the second time.

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