6 thoughts on “Summer Song

  1. magicpoet01

    This poem reads rhythmically very well, it also shows your influence from Japanese writing perhaps. It is tight language with the focus on sound in the first stanza and leading to the steam rising from the roads. Yet we know it is also from the hot mating of the bike riders who leave the bar. So much and so subtle!

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